tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post6163301651630848830..comments2023-10-15T04:31:42.336-06:00Comments on Newt's Muse: PFC #3Newthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03350406826173534161noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-34645942864319635492008-04-20T10:20:00.000-06:002008-04-20T10:20:00.000-06:00Great job newtI think my favorite part was learnin...Great job newt<BR/><BR/>I think my favorite part was learning that the Dad and his little girl passed the sock puppet back and forth year to year. Such a beautiful way of noting their connection.<BR/><BR/>I like the cop and hope he moves to the country.Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02946500110072411468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-20856957099982668592008-04-17T16:52:00.000-06:002008-04-17T16:52:00.000-06:00Wow! That was a great story. This month is just po...Wow! That was a great story. This month is just pouring out some amazing stories! Those pictures must've been pretty darn inspiring after all!<BR/><BR/>Absolutely love how you incorporated the stuffed animal - that was simply brilliant!<BR/><BR/>I could really feel it as I read it, and as Single mentioned - that part where the father just knew what he was about to learn was very touching.<BR/><BR/>Stellar story!R.E.H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04959653462160442710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-77721316506512656082008-04-17T08:38:00.000-06:002008-04-17T08:38:00.000-06:00That was excellent. Really excellent.That was excellent. Really excellent.Kellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07275488871572628293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-67010832392343897332008-04-17T05:41:00.000-06:002008-04-17T05:41:00.000-06:00you just wrote this down? are you kidding?wowyou just wrote this down? are you kidding?<BR/>wowgary rithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18228113061045717115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-5717781998556370722008-04-16T19:49:00.000-06:002008-04-16T19:49:00.000-06:00This was beautifully done. I loved the way you wor...This was beautifully done. I loved the way you worked the puppet thing in. Such a lovely idea. Mine's up too, for what it's worth.Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-42390705244154279682008-04-16T19:39:00.000-06:002008-04-16T19:39:00.000-06:00Bravo! I really enjoyed your take on the photos an...Bravo! I really enjoyed your take on the photos and your naritive style was done very well.<BR/><BR/>Nice job working in the puppet thing as well.Jeff Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10978944708950054312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-4612796958053648422008-04-16T19:37:00.000-06:002008-04-16T19:37:00.000-06:00It is a great story.. And when you said "she's gon...It is a great story.. And when you said "she's gone ain't she? I teared up! LOL!! I love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-67331915367024844522008-04-16T19:07:00.000-06:002008-04-16T19:07:00.000-06:00Newt, I loved it. The cop's voice, the simplicity ...Newt, I loved it. The cop's voice, the simplicity of it & yet the huge spaces of feeling that exist behind the words--I wanted this to be a whole book just to hear him think. This was a powerful story, really got under my skin :)Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09638509010212406012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-16415431598861312822008-04-16T17:25:00.000-06:002008-04-16T17:25:00.000-06:00This was really good. And, maybe like jay's in a ...This was really good. And, maybe like <B>jay's</B> in a way, but then totally different.<BR/><BR/>The decipher from the city to the country. I liked your take on the country (I'm lucky to live like that -- although, the city is just a half hour away on one side).<BR/><BR/>The cop, the sherriff, the Dad. I liked them all.<BR/><BR/>Cool Beans!Farmer*swife a/k/a Glass_Half_Fullhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06369013637299261668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-25085377857416002102008-04-16T15:31:00.000-06:002008-04-16T15:31:00.000-06:00Betty - you're a great writer, give it a shot. I ...Betty - you're a great writer, give it a shot. I bet you'll knock us all on our petooties<BR/><BR/>Jay - dang dude, it's like we share the same brain. No wonder I am tortured with images of scantily clad women all the time. LOLNewthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03350406826173534161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-58540602648102787992008-04-16T14:52:00.000-06:002008-04-16T14:52:00.000-06:00Newt, you're not gonna believe it when you read mi...Newt, you're not gonna believe it when you read mine. Lets just say we saw the same thing in that hard-rocking character. LOL <BR/><BR/>Great story. I could feel the cop's sadness and feeling of helplessness there.Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134850383532818765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13640069.post-10956166335146078942008-04-16T14:30:00.000-06:002008-04-16T14:30:00.000-06:00Great story, Newt. I couldn't even begin to try on...Great story, Newt. I couldn't even begin to try one of these challenges.Bettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07309266986583326824noreply@blogger.com